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While looking for the link for Grammarly I came across this useful, unconnected little online gizmo:

English Syntax Highlighter - does what it says on the tin. As someone who knows what words mean and how they should sound when spoken, but who has never managed to grasp the vocabulary and rules of language itself beyond about 4th-grade level, this is an interesting and educational thingumywotsit.

If you toggle the right bits on and off, it picks out every instance of a particular type of word.  The default is different colours for different types of word, all together in one big rainbow soup which my brain found about as helpful as a dose of LSD, but once I found the toggle and went one at a time - marvellous free toy.  I imagine it's aimed at people learning English as a foreign language, but I can see a fic writer's use for it in spotting patterns in word distribution to understand style, or homing in on a 'problem area' in a way that's helpful to concentration. Say I think I might have boring verbs and could benefit from a thesaurus in a few places; this would let me highlight all the verbs and focus on them to the exclusion of all the other words in the passage. By toggling the highlighting on and off, I could isolate all my nouns and instantly spot if I was being repetitive, or spelling somebody's name wrong half the time.

Context is everything in fiction, of course, and looking at words in isolation won't go far, but this could really help with the fine detail.  And who knows, it might finally learn me my determiner from my adposition.  Plus, what a spiffy piece of coding. Kudos, coder.
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maid(s, in a castle) >> house cleaner(s)
maid(en) >> house cleaner
mistress (as a form of address) >> lover, head of household
councilmen >> council members
mankind  >> humankind, humanity (that one's okay)
seamstresses  >>  tailors, menders
man (as in man to man)  >> staff, take control of (?!?)

Word's new inclusive-language checker, a truly handy thing for non-fiction/neutral POV writing, has some fundamental issues with the faux-medieval-misogynistic in-world language of A Bed of Thorns. And is occasionally just plain stupid and wrong, just like its grammar-checking predecessors.  And don't get me started on the unholy things it still tries to do with commas.

I'll have to give it a proper run for its money one of these days and see how it does across the gender and sexuality spectrums in non-fiction. Meanwhile, it can butt the hell out of my faux-medieval worldbuilding and my faux-medieval character's entirely biased POV, especially where it only recognises one definition for simple words with an archaic or alternate usage. C'mon Microsoft, it's about time we had a "fiction" setting on this thing. Or at least one that ignores things it doesn't like provided they're between quotation marks.
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Working with Hemingway is like getting a school report every few hours. I don't share its aversion to adverbs, not in prose, but it turns out I use surprisingly few. Huh.

I intentionally wrote a lot of passive voice and archaic/purple-prose language into A Bed of Thorns. I had this whole idea about Belle's narrative voice changing throughout the piece as she came down off her bookish cloud, stopped acting like she was living a fairytale, and started dealing with real life. The language would get tighter and tighter as the story built towards its climax.  That idea totally bombed, didn't fit with the pacing that evolved nor with Belle's stubbornly-sensible mindset, so now I have to weed it all out and make her voice consistent throughout. Hemingway is going to make that job a lot easier. But I also need to make Belle a bit less stubbornly sensible. Her canon self is... prone to blind leaps of faith. She buys into the hero thing and believes in just desserts. ABoT!Belle asks herself too many of (what I consider to be) the right questions. She needs to be less cautious, more reckless. Hemingway stats screenshot behind the cut )
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Wow, Hemingway Editor is a keeper. It does one job and it does it well. It's not going to take me right through the process of writing and revising a story, but it's by far the best tool I've ever met for focusing the mind - and the editing - on readability. Word can now do this alongside the old spelling and grammar tools, but it's annoying, complex, and has no grasp at all of prose, always assuming that I'm writing an official document or a formal letter rather than smutty emo fanfic.

Other than nitpicking for adverbs and passive voice, Hemingway leaves it to me to make the style decisions, to decide exactly what's wrong and what to change (if anything), and just flags up passages where I could make readability better. It uses a simple colour code with a simple key alongside, and gives a few stats.

Hemingway screenshot behind the cut... )

Click the "write" button in the corner, and all the colour coding goes away, leaving a clean workspace with unadulterated text. Click the "edit" button and it all pops back. No digging into menus and sub-menus or remembering keyboard shortcuts to toggle the clutter on/off. That's the kind of workspace my easily-muddled braincell likes.

Text handling is a bit sluggish, like keyboard lag back in the old days when I typed faster than a processor could think, but Hemingway is doing quite a lot of work to make all that happen on a few thousand words at a time.  I can wait for it to catch up in return for this much help/this little clutter.

That's $19.99 + VAT for you, Hemingway! If I could set the background and text colours for less eyestrain, I'd pay ten times that. The online version is free and doesn't require a sign-in or anything. Just paste some text in or start typing.  I've bought the Windows app, which adds file import/export, document saving, and everything else you need to make text and keep it.

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My biggest problem with revising/editing/redrafting my fanfic has always been my inability to organise the job. Read more... )